गुरुवार, अक्‍तूबर 06, 2005

Unreasonable...

He was an integral part of her,
she never thought of them being two separate entities,
and she knew that even he felt the same.

...

He once accused her.
He said that she doesn't let him be himself,
that she thought that his life belonged to her,
and that he did not have a right to live his life without her.

It was true, but in a different way.

Different because she always felt that she is not herself without him,
because she had surrendered her life to him,
and because she believed that she had no reason to live without him.

...

She decided to let him be,
She allowed to let him go.

He thought of setting her free,
He forced himself away.

...

She knew that he'll be back.
He knew that she'll wait.

....

Void moments kept happening
nothing really happened in them
apart from their efforts to hold themselves back

....

She hoped him to be back.
He hoped her to give up waiting.

84 Comments:

Blogger Medha.. said...

This was beautiful! Vety well- written! =D

10/06/2005 12:57:00 अपराह्न  
Blogger Shruti T A said...

Wow. :)

10/06/2005 02:27:00 अपराह्न  
Blogger uttara said...

hey thats really a nice 1 man..
too good :))

uttara

10/06/2005 04:18:00 अपराह्न  
Blogger sophie said...

hey...nice one man...how how how??
anything interesting happening in life???

10/06/2005 05:19:00 अपराह्न  
Blogger Deez said...

ouch! that was too good.
u spanned an eternity in just a few words.

10/06/2005 05:29:00 अपराह्न  
Blogger Archita Hegde said...

Can u please change the color in light pls

its very tought to read.

10/06/2005 05:46:00 अपराह्न  
Blogger Sangeeta said...

very frustrating........ and sad:( reminds me of....:((

10/06/2005 08:45:00 अपराह्न  
Blogger . : A : . said...

Very nice juxtaposition of perspectives.

10/07/2005 06:44:00 पूर्वाह्न  
Blogger Keshi said...

**She hoped him to be back.
He hoped her to give up waiting.


usual ego that parts ppl forever...


Cleverly written...
Keshi.

10/07/2005 08:09:00 पूर्वाह्न  
Blogger Xena said...

Very well written :) and it sure does feel gr8t to be back here. Am addicted again!!! :D

10/07/2005 11:12:00 पूर्वाह्न  
Anonymous shonali said...

life's bitter moments

10/07/2005 11:19:00 पूर्वाह्न  
Blogger AmitKen said...

Medha, Uttara, Archita

Thanks.
Welcome to my blog, hope to see you around again..

Flickering Flame, . : A : . , Keshi
Thank you.

sophia
Life is always interesting... ain't it :)

Deez,
i am flattered.. never knew that kinda complements could be used for my writings :)

Sangeeta,
that tells... life is so repetitive, it repeats itself with everyone.

Xena
Welcome back to addiction. hope to see you around frequently.

shonali
well... yes! what can i say..

10/07/2005 11:27:00 पूर्वाह्न  
Anonymous Alex said...

Not much left to say....

Lovely peice!

10/07/2005 01:23:00 अपराह्न  
Blogger anumita said...

Beautifully written. The helplessness and hopelessness of being in love comes through!

10/07/2005 05:40:00 अपराह्न  
Blogger Slice Of Life said...

really good...did she give up waiting ?
uma

10/08/2005 12:05:00 अपराह्न  
Blogger soumya said...

grt post...

10/08/2005 03:00:00 अपराह्न  
Blogger Animesh said...

Damn! Deja FUCKIN Vu

10/10/2005 02:34:00 अपराह्न  
Blogger Aradhita said...

Very true! Nicely put :)

10/11/2005 06:08:00 अपराह्न  
Blogger Phoenix Rises said...

That's one of the sadest things I've ever read! The pain of separation was so profoundly, but simply put...

10/12/2005 12:48:00 पूर्वाह्न  
Blogger Deez said...

oh, btw, i just tagged u.....

10/12/2005 02:06:00 पूर्वाह्न  
Anonymous priya said...

beautifully written about the complex relations. a hug is on its way. :):) keep smilin n shinin

10/12/2005 01:09:00 अपराह्न  
Blogger Arunima said...

ye kya baat huwi?

killing themselves?

10/13/2005 07:20:00 अपराह्न  
Blogger Varun said...

Awesome :). First time on ur blog man, and its worth a second look for sure..

10/13/2005 10:52:00 अपराह्न  
Blogger Blackempress said...

This one gave a shiver all over. Its so true.
We start with each other & end up saving ourselves. In that attempt of trying to complete a life, we end up leaving more spaces than those that had already been there before.
Good one.

10/14/2005 07:21:00 अपराह्न  
Blogger Pallavi said...

ExcellenT!!!!!!!!! WE all go thru this at some point in our lives...

Just AMAZING!!!!!! I read it 5 times. Very very very well written!!!!

So true. So So So true! Cant get over it. i love it.

10/15/2005 12:40:00 पूर्वाह्न  
Anonymous shonali said...

wanna comment on your new look of the blog.... black is always goes... looks exotic... :-)) keep smiling

10/16/2005 12:38:00 पूर्वाह्न  
Blogger Medha.. said...

Dude...time to update!

10/18/2005 08:43:00 पूर्वाह्न  
Blogger Arz000n said...

She decided to let him be,
She allowed to let him go.

He thought of setting her free,
He forced himself away.


Someone exactly like this happend to me today morning, even before the day started.

Im so down since morning..

Will she come back?
I dont know..

He hoped her to give up waiting.
This is what Im doing right now.

Good one Amit

10/18/2005 03:08:00 अपराह्न  
Blogger AmitKen said...

something is wrong with the blogger.. it is not allowing me to publish new posts :(

10/18/2005 04:46:00 अपराह्न  
Blogger Aradhita said...

try harder man!! We are waiting :)

10/18/2005 06:19:00 अपराह्न  
Blogger Twilight Fairy said...

sad .. uske baad kuch nahi? dono ko koi aur milva do :p

yeah blog meets all by my own, kya karein.. aur koi chara bhee nahi thaa :D..

10/18/2005 07:07:00 अपराह्न  
Blogger AmitKen said...

Alex, soumya
Thank you :)

anumita
I dont think love makes one helpless, but it surely makes one hopeless ;-))

chennai pages
Only time will tell..


Animesh
you got it right buddy ;)


Phoenix Rises
saddest thing!!! well, i dont know if that was a complement or ...???

Deez
oh you are so sweet Deez! thanks.
i'll post that tag as soon as my blog stops acting stupid :-o

priya
thank you 'smilin n shinin' priya :o)

Arunima
Exactly... it's sad but sometimes people prefer killing themselves rather than living for their love.

Varun
Thanks Varun, and welcome to my blog. hope to see u around again

Blackempress
i wont mind it that much if it's done to save ourselves... but sometimes people do it to save each other, not realising that their actions are actually doing the opposite..

Pallavi
Thank you..

shonali
that tells me that you visted my blog after a long gap...
but i agree with your observation about black :)

Medha
I wanna do so, but blogger is acting crazy you see... it doesn't allow me to do a thing :-(

Arz000n
Oh! buddy.. i hope this phase gets over soon and she comes back to you sooner..

Aradhita,
thank you...
and irrespective of how hard i try i cant do much, there seems to be some prob at Blogger's end. i've written to them and I am hoping that they resolve it soon.
I know even these comments are not gonna show up for now.. but i thought it was my responsibility to reply to all you nice people, so i am responding to it only hoping that soon the probelm will be resolved and these comments would show up :-|

Twilight Fairy
Milwa do? heheh.. if they are willing to meet again who can stop them...

Anonymous
Hello anonymous spammer :-/

10/19/2005 03:55:00 अपराह्न  
Blogger Phoenix Rises said...

Hi!
I meant it as a compliment. You really brought out the pain the couple is going through.

10/20/2005 12:10:00 पूर्वाह्न  
Anonymous बेनामी said...

Tragic...touching...telling...
Very well composed.
-Anya

10/20/2005 12:19:00 पूर्वाह्न  
Blogger AmitKen said...

Guys!

The 8th Delhi Bloggers' Meet http://delhiblogmeet.rediffblogs.com is happening this saturday.

If you are in delhi this saturday, you should be there for some simulating discussions, some meaningful and some not-so-meaningful chats over a plate of momo's and a glass of Fruit Beer...

When: 22nd Oct'05 , 5.00 pm onwards
Where: Dilli Haat, Manipur food stall


If you need any more details mail me at funduken[at]yahoo[dot]co.in or call me on 9313373881.

Please spread the word, i hope to see you there....

10/20/2005 10:21:00 पूर्वाह्न  
Blogger Keshi said...

void moments shall end now cos Im back Amit ;-)

Keshi.

10/21/2005 04:51:00 पूर्वाह्न  
Blogger sebia said...

beautiful stuff.i read it so many days bfre and didnt comment cuz smtimes u see smthing so touching and beautiful that u dont want 2 ruin the feeling by trying 2 capture it in 2 wrds.
anyways dont u think its time 2 update..and update with smthing which can bring some smiles:)

10/21/2005 06:04:00 पूर्वाह्न  
Anonymous Sanjukta said...

hey, i know that's not original...your mind copied the piece from your soul...no one can think of such pain...one can only feel them

10/21/2005 08:40:00 अपराह्न  
Blogger Art said...

too good amit...

10/27/2005 05:50:00 पूर्वाह्न  
Anonymous Ajay said...

Very creative..and very impressive!!

10/27/2005 07:55:00 अपराह्न  
Blogger Geetika said...

good one

10/28/2005 10:01:00 अपराह्न  
Blogger Hiren said...

Very nicely written. Though written in prose it smacks of poetic expremssion. Always nice to bump into fellow poets.

10/29/2005 11:54:00 पूर्वाह्न  
Blogger visithra said...

Happy Birthday Amit :)

have a wonderful day and a scary halloween with orders to have loads of fun ;)

10/31/2005 08:31:00 पूर्वाह्न  
Blogger visithra said...

and happy diwali ;)

10/31/2005 03:16:00 अपराह्न  
Blogger Jeevan said...

Happy Birthday Amit

10/31/2005 03:26:00 अपराह्न  
Blogger Sangeeta said...

wish u a very happy and safe Diwali

11/01/2005 07:48:00 अपराह्न  
Blogger Sangeeta said...

oops...wish u a very happy belated birthday as well

11/01/2005 07:49:00 अपराह्न  
Anonymous बेनामी said...

realy nice post keep writing ...

11/05/2005 11:59:00 अपराह्न  
Blogger Demi Goddezz said...

Amit:happy belated Bday and Happy Diwali...

Loved those lines... We all wait...Its good if one of them stopped and came back..

11/06/2005 05:46:00 पूर्वाह्न  
Blogger AmitKen said...

Phoenix Rises, Anya, Sanjukta, Art, ajay, Geetika, Hiren Shah, Anon
Many thanks.

keshi
Glad that you are back :)

Sebia
Thanks for commenting :) i know i am dying to write new posts, but this blogger bug is still not allowing me to post anything new. I guess i'll have to dump this blog and start posting on a new blog instead..

visithra
Thank you so much for your wishes. I am glad that you remembered :)

Sangeeta
Thank you so much for your wishes, hope you had great festive time. :o)

Jeevan, Demi Goddezz
Thanks a lot!!!

11/07/2005 07:08:00 अपराह्न  
Blogger Rohit Talwar said...

very, very nice! :)

11/08/2005 05:56:00 अपराह्न  
Blogger Phoenix Rises said...

Hey! Are you still not able to post?

11/09/2005 12:34:00 पूर्वाह्न  
Blogger Keshi said...

hugggz Amit!

Keshi.

11/09/2005 05:24:00 पूर्वाह्न  
Blogger Aradhita said...

this is too long a wait yaar!!

11/09/2005 09:07:00 अपराह्न  
Blogger San said...

lol i think most of the comments on here covered my thoughts on this post :)

thanks for dropping in btw ... i'll have to visit more often now :)

11/11/2005 01:56:00 पूर्वाह्न  
Blogger Pallavi said...

when areu going to update ur blog?

11/11/2005 10:23:00 अपराह्न  
Blogger Rohit Talwar said...

TIME TO UPDATE...............

11/12/2005 04:20:00 अपराह्न  
Blogger AmitKen said...

keshi,
I'll respond on ur blog. :) btw... is this a prank or something??

Pallavi,
as i've said earlier my blog doesn't allow me to publish new posts anymore.. i'll start with a new blog very soon. :o))

11/14/2005 06:46:00 अपराह्न  
Blogger Keshi said...

Amit dun respond to that loser...just do ur usual stuff. I have replied to u in my yday's post...

have a good day!
Keshi.

11/15/2005 09:35:00 पूर्वाह्न  
Blogger sebia said...

dont u think its high time 2 change ur blog if cuz of sm problem u cant type here;)

11/16/2005 02:43:00 पूर्वाह्न  
Blogger Pallavi said...

Ok amit waiting for ur new blog link :)

11/16/2005 10:59:00 पूर्वाह्न  
Blogger exasparater said...

hey beautifully written!!

11/16/2005 11:29:00 अपराह्न  
Anonymous keshi said...

Amit its me...that loser comments like me everywhere and makes it tough for my blogmates coz he is a lonely loser who is cranium deprived LOL!

hugggzzz Amit!

Take care Matey :)

Keshi

11/17/2005 12:13:00 पूर्वाह्न  
Blogger Keshi said...

Idiots never give up on shit..


Hey Amit how have u been? No new posts...

Keshi.

11/18/2005 04:25:00 पूर्वाह्न  
Blogger icyblue said...

And there ends a relationship...
And all moments are lost forever..

Nicely written.

11/24/2005 05:57:00 अपराह्न  
Anonymous Keshi said...

Amit the above 2 Keshi comments are not by me.

This loser is trying so hard to be like me lol!

Keshi.

11/24/2005 06:28:00 अपराह्न  
Blogger Blackempress said...

blog plz.

I loved this so much I saved a copy on my comp to read again and agian.

11/25/2005 12:43:00 अपराह्न  
Blogger Gangadhar said...

Beautiful!!!!
Dropped here from Pallavi's blog..

11/27/2005 11:31:00 पूर्वाह्न  
Blogger Ash said...

perfect cosolidation .....indeed .....

11/29/2005 05:06:00 अपराह्न  
Blogger AmitKen said...

MY NEW BLOG ADDRESS IS AS FOLLOWS:

http://amitken.wordpress.com

the addiction continues there. Hope to see you at my new blog :o)

11/29/2005 06:38:00 अपराह्न  
Blogger bharti said...

all d amazing things ve already been said to u....but still...i wud say it again...
u ve written amazingly beautiful...

11/30/2005 09:54:00 अपराह्न  
Blogger Blackempress said...

hey ...I been trying to comment on the blog since ages...it never saves my comment:(

12/05/2005 01:46:00 अपराह्न  
Anonymous Shikha said...

thx for visiting...finally updated mine

12/12/2005 01:00:00 अपराह्न  
Blogger Nakul Mandan said...

Beautifully written!

12/30/2005 04:43:00 अपराह्न  
Blogger saby said...

who the fuck told u i am gay ??

1/06/2006 02:09:00 अपराह्न  
Anonymous बेनामी said...

Your contribution in tribute of .:A:. was great..Im glad your coice out your thoughts...

Somehow in relationships we tend to not only to tie the knot we wish if we can tie the two souls ...

Thanks for sharing
Nasra

www.livinginpoetry.blogspot.com

1/23/2006 12:04:00 पूर्वाह्न  
Blogger Shiv said...

Truly got me addicted!!

2/22/2006 11:28:00 पूर्वाह्न  
Blogger NicoleW said...

Hi, a nice blog you have here. You will surely get an bookmark :) Fleshlight

2/26/2006 03:30:00 पूर्वाह्न  
Blogger sona said...

hey amitken
how r u?...its damn gud...it has so mch depth....luved it...keep writing..tc

3/24/2006 05:46:00 अपराह्न  
Blogger Wunderkind said...

beautifully written...i'm a fellow delhi blogger but hadnt visited your blog earlier.came here after seeing the pics on flickr...from the link u left on the mailing list.quite a roundabout way isnt it! but i will be back..

4/02/2006 12:19:00 पूर्वाह्न  
Blogger Rita said...

A little depressing, na?

6/06/2006 07:41:00 अपराह्न  
Blogger Ekaant said...

very well expressed.

6/11/2006 09:50:00 अपराह्न  
Blogger Ekaant said...

A thought process very well expressed..

6/11/2006 09:51:00 अपराह्न  
Blogger Ekta said...

:-(
thats awesome piece but said!!
But its the sad reality of many relationships today

6/15/2006 02:19:00 अपराह्न  

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