Unreasonable...
He was an integral part of her,
she never thought of them being two separate entities,
and she knew that even he felt the same.
...
He once accused her.
He said that she doesn't let him be himself,
that she thought that his life belonged to her,
and that he did not have a right to live his life without her.
It was true, but in a different way.
Different because she always felt that she is not herself without him,
because she had surrendered her life to him,
and because she believed that she had no reason to live without him.
...
She decided to let him be,
She allowed to let him go.
He thought of setting her free,
He forced himself away.
...
She knew that he'll be back.
He knew that she'll wait.
....
Void moments kept happening
nothing really happened in them
apart from their efforts to hold themselves back
....
She hoped him to be back.
He hoped her to give up waiting.
she never thought of them being two separate entities,
and she knew that even he felt the same.
...
He once accused her.
He said that she doesn't let him be himself,
that she thought that his life belonged to her,
and that he did not have a right to live his life without her.
It was true, but in a different way.
Different because she always felt that she is not herself without him,
because she had surrendered her life to him,
and because she believed that she had no reason to live without him.
...
She decided to let him be,
She allowed to let him go.
He thought of setting her free,
He forced himself away.
...
She knew that he'll be back.
He knew that she'll wait.
....
Void moments kept happening
nothing really happened in them
apart from their efforts to hold themselves back
....
She hoped him to be back.
He hoped her to give up waiting.




84 Comments:
This was beautiful! Vety well- written! =D
Wow. :)
hey thats really a nice 1 man..
too good :))
uttara
hey...nice one man...how how how??
anything interesting happening in life???
ouch! that was too good.
u spanned an eternity in just a few words.
Can u please change the color in light pls
its very tought to read.
very frustrating........ and sad:( reminds me of....:((
Very nice juxtaposition of perspectives.
**She hoped him to be back.
He hoped her to give up waiting.
usual ego that parts ppl forever...
Cleverly written...
Keshi.
Very well written :) and it sure does feel gr8t to be back here. Am addicted again!!! :D
life's bitter moments
Medha, Uttara, Archita
Thanks.
Welcome to my blog, hope to see you around again..
Flickering Flame, . : A : . , Keshi
Thank you.
sophia
Life is always interesting... ain't it :)
Deez,
i am flattered.. never knew that kinda complements could be used for my writings :)
Sangeeta,
that tells... life is so repetitive, it repeats itself with everyone.
Xena
Welcome back to addiction. hope to see you around frequently.
shonali
well... yes! what can i say..
Not much left to say....
Lovely peice!
Beautifully written. The helplessness and hopelessness of being in love comes through!
really good...did she give up waiting ?
uma
grt post...
Damn! Deja FUCKIN Vu
Very true! Nicely put :)
That's one of the sadest things I've ever read! The pain of separation was so profoundly, but simply put...
oh, btw, i just tagged u.....
beautifully written about the complex relations. a hug is on its way. :):) keep smilin n shinin
ye kya baat huwi?
killing themselves?
Awesome :). First time on ur blog man, and its worth a second look for sure..
This one gave a shiver all over. Its so true.
We start with each other & end up saving ourselves. In that attempt of trying to complete a life, we end up leaving more spaces than those that had already been there before.
Good one.
ExcellenT!!!!!!!!! WE all go thru this at some point in our lives...
Just AMAZING!!!!!! I read it 5 times. Very very very well written!!!!
So true. So So So true! Cant get over it. i love it.
wanna comment on your new look of the blog.... black is always goes... looks exotic... :-)) keep smiling
Dude...time to update!
She decided to let him be,
She allowed to let him go.
He thought of setting her free,
He forced himself away.
Someone exactly like this happend to me today morning, even before the day started.
Im so down since morning..
Will she come back?
I dont know..
He hoped her to give up waiting.
This is what Im doing right now.
Good one Amit
something is wrong with the blogger.. it is not allowing me to publish new posts :(
try harder man!! We are waiting :)
sad .. uske baad kuch nahi? dono ko koi aur milva do :p
yeah blog meets all by my own, kya karein.. aur koi chara bhee nahi thaa :D..
Alex, soumya
Thank you :)
anumita
I dont think love makes one helpless, but it surely makes one hopeless ;-))
chennai pages
Only time will tell..
Animesh
you got it right buddy ;)
Phoenix Rises
saddest thing!!! well, i dont know if that was a complement or ...???
Deez
oh you are so sweet Deez! thanks.
i'll post that tag as soon as my blog stops acting stupid :-o
priya
thank you 'smilin n shinin' priya :o)
Arunima
Exactly... it's sad but sometimes people prefer killing themselves rather than living for their love.
Varun
Thanks Varun, and welcome to my blog. hope to see u around again
Blackempress
i wont mind it that much if it's done to save ourselves... but sometimes people do it to save each other, not realising that their actions are actually doing the opposite..
Pallavi
Thank you..
shonali
that tells me that you visted my blog after a long gap...
but i agree with your observation about black :)
Medha
I wanna do so, but blogger is acting crazy you see... it doesn't allow me to do a thing :-(
Arz000n
Oh! buddy.. i hope this phase gets over soon and she comes back to you sooner..
Aradhita,
thank you...
and irrespective of how hard i try i cant do much, there seems to be some prob at Blogger's end. i've written to them and I am hoping that they resolve it soon.
I know even these comments are not gonna show up for now.. but i thought it was my responsibility to reply to all you nice people, so i am responding to it only hoping that soon the probelm will be resolved and these comments would show up :-|
Twilight Fairy
Milwa do? heheh.. if they are willing to meet again who can stop them...
Anonymous
Hello anonymous spammer :-/
Hi!
I meant it as a compliment. You really brought out the pain the couple is going through.
Tragic...touching...telling...
Very well composed.
-Anya
Guys!
The 8th Delhi Bloggers' Meet http://delhiblogmeet.rediffblogs.com is happening this saturday.
If you are in delhi this saturday, you should be there for some simulating discussions, some meaningful and some not-so-meaningful chats over a plate of momo's and a glass of Fruit Beer...
When: 22nd Oct'05 , 5.00 pm onwards
Where: Dilli Haat, Manipur food stall
If you need any more details mail me at funduken[at]yahoo[dot]co.in or call me on 9313373881.
Please spread the word, i hope to see you there....
void moments shall end now cos Im back Amit ;-)
Keshi.
beautiful stuff.i read it so many days bfre and didnt comment cuz smtimes u see smthing so touching and beautiful that u dont want 2 ruin the feeling by trying 2 capture it in 2 wrds.
anyways dont u think its time 2 update..and update with smthing which can bring some smiles:)
hey, i know that's not original...your mind copied the piece from your soul...no one can think of such pain...one can only feel them
too good amit...
Very creative..and very impressive!!
good one
Very nicely written. Though written in prose it smacks of poetic expremssion. Always nice to bump into fellow poets.
Happy Birthday Amit :)
have a wonderful day and a scary halloween with orders to have loads of fun ;)
and happy diwali ;)
Happy Birthday Amit
wish u a very happy and safe Diwali
oops...wish u a very happy belated birthday as well
realy nice post keep writing ...
Amit:happy belated Bday and Happy Diwali...
Loved those lines... We all wait...Its good if one of them stopped and came back..
Phoenix Rises, Anya, Sanjukta, Art, ajay, Geetika, Hiren Shah, Anon
Many thanks.
keshi
Glad that you are back :)
Sebia
Thanks for commenting :) i know i am dying to write new posts, but this blogger bug is still not allowing me to post anything new. I guess i'll have to dump this blog and start posting on a new blog instead..
visithra
Thank you so much for your wishes. I am glad that you remembered :)
Sangeeta
Thank you so much for your wishes, hope you had great festive time. :o)
Jeevan, Demi Goddezz
Thanks a lot!!!
very, very nice! :)
Hey! Are you still not able to post?
hugggz Amit!
Keshi.
this is too long a wait yaar!!
lol i think most of the comments on here covered my thoughts on this post :)
thanks for dropping in btw ... i'll have to visit more often now :)
when areu going to update ur blog?
TIME TO UPDATE...............
keshi,
I'll respond on ur blog. :) btw... is this a prank or something??
Pallavi,
as i've said earlier my blog doesn't allow me to publish new posts anymore.. i'll start with a new blog very soon. :o))
Amit dun respond to that loser...just do ur usual stuff. I have replied to u in my yday's post...
have a good day!
Keshi.
dont u think its high time 2 change ur blog if cuz of sm problem u cant type here;)
Ok amit waiting for ur new blog link :)
hey beautifully written!!
Amit its me...that loser comments like me everywhere and makes it tough for my blogmates coz he is a lonely loser who is cranium deprived LOL!
hugggzzz Amit!
Take care Matey :)
Keshi
Idiots never give up on shit..
Hey Amit how have u been? No new posts...
Keshi.
And there ends a relationship...
And all moments are lost forever..
Nicely written.
Amit the above 2 Keshi comments are not by me.
This loser is trying so hard to be like me lol!
Keshi.
blog plz.
I loved this so much I saved a copy on my comp to read again and agian.
Beautiful!!!!
Dropped here from Pallavi's blog..
perfect cosolidation .....indeed .....
MY NEW BLOG ADDRESS IS AS FOLLOWS:
http://amitken.wordpress.com
the addiction continues there. Hope to see you at my new blog :o)
all d amazing things ve already been said to u....but still...i wud say it again...
u ve written amazingly beautiful...
hey ...I been trying to comment on the blog since ages...it never saves my comment:(
thx for visiting...finally updated mine
Beautifully written!
who the fuck told u i am gay ??
Your contribution in tribute of .:A:. was great..Im glad your coice out your thoughts...
Somehow in relationships we tend to not only to tie the knot we wish if we can tie the two souls ...
Thanks for sharing
Nasra
www.livinginpoetry.blogspot.com
Truly got me addicted!!
Hi, a nice blog you have here. You will surely get an bookmark :) Fleshlight
hey amitken
how r u?...its damn gud...it has so mch depth....luved it...keep writing..tc
beautifully written...i'm a fellow delhi blogger but hadnt visited your blog earlier.came here after seeing the pics on flickr...from the link u left on the mailing list.quite a roundabout way isnt it! but i will be back..
A little depressing, na?
very well expressed.
A thought process very well expressed..
:-(
thats awesome piece but said!!
But its the sad reality of many relationships today
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